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Marissa Atherton's avatar

This is so fun! I have a love/hate relationship with short stories…I find I always want more!

Kelly Bond's avatar

You have a gift! This is so well done. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Natalia Testa's avatar

Thank you so much! It means so much!

I wrote a sequel I hope to put up in two weeks, I hope you like that one too ;)

Kelly Bond's avatar

It reads like Golden Age detective fiction and gives me the feeling I get when I read an old book. The language!!

Nadia's avatar

I love this story, Natalia! Your writing style reminds me very much of Dorothy L. Sayers, who is one of my favourite authors! I am looking forward to reading more of your work :)

Natalia Testa's avatar

Nadia, oh my goodness, what a compliment! Dorothy Sayers is my favorite author! Thanks so much for the comment. ;)